Here’s your cut.
See you in Mexico.
Dust had gathered
on top of this box
for so many years.
How long had
all this money
been waiting here?
My fingers slip
over the stack…
hundreds upon hundreds.
It had been a running
joke among family
that dad swindled the feds.
My father, did he
have an accomplice–
someone he left this for?
I’m the only one
left who’s around
so my heart turns sore.
They hunted us down
one by every single one
but I’m the one to survive.
This house – not a home -
holds many secrets
even after they died.
I returned only
to find the will
and yet here’s a note
with this money,
unused and forgotten,
because this is what I know…
There’s no one waiting in Mexico.

Nice one, Mikael. I also checked out your blog, and I like your style! Keep up the good work!
AND, with all those jobs, I caan’t imagine when you will find time to read the other ten parts of “The Last Grain of Sand”, but if you do, let me know what you think of them!
Now, get back to work!
Sometimes I have downtime at work… Reading keepings me calm so I’m sure I will find time. ;)
Thank you!
woohoo! Mik is back! GREAT entry for FWF!!! Love the mystery and the final line is PERFECT!!! Thanks for writing for me again, love! xoxoxo
Kellie
ps… LOVE the new blog!
Thank YOU for keeping up with FWF! ;) And thanks doubly for the blog comment.
a lovely memory recalled.
I really like this! Like Kellie said, the final line is perfect, it really made an impact! Great job! I did the prompt too, if you want to see what I came up with feel free to check it out http://talichaj.com/2012/02/06/red-a-short-story/